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Magna's Wife Dying In His Arms (Unfinished Sketch)

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Some kinda comic Idea i'm working on "The Tale Of The Magna Defender"

(Starts off from beginning his early life becoming a defender to also his family and the loss his wife and then later his of son, and the to the position of the lights of Orion and back story with scorpious and his general’s and to when he was defeated and fell in to a hole in the ground (On Maranoi) the prequel to PR Lost Galaxy)

Subjects to cover:

Becoming the magna defender
His family, Wife & Son
His comrades
The position of the lights of Orion
His back story with scorpious & his generals
How the death of his comrades, wife & family changed him
Revenge taking over & his final battle with Treturon and his to
defeat on Maranoi which comes to PR lost galaxy


Death Scene of Magna defenders wife: (Amerai)

Scene: 1

The Magna defender returns to his home village, & finds, his town lifeless on the ground around him, magna did not trust the silence around him,

Magna: ……Its quite,….to quite…… (looking all around him) & told his son (to wait, here in a bush & be quiet not to make a sound)

Magna slowly walked into his abandoned village, (with his hand tightly gripped by his side, with one hand over his sword)

(A shadow figure speeded past behind him, laughing)

Magna: (Grunting….ahh) who’s there show yourself….. (magna transformed his sword into gun mode) (locked & loaded) (He then ran towards a house peering around the corner, the laughs were getting louder, magna then noticed a door and kicked it open) (No body here, he views the room around him.

Magna: arrh, (Grabed on the sholder, magna turns and side kicks the monster to the floor)


Magna: ha, I knew I could sense the vowel stench, of evil in my presents, Ha! (magna charges toward him, magna, duel’s the (unknown enemy) elbowing him in the chest, but gets out matched & blast in the chest and gets sent firing out of the house and out side on to the floor)

Magna: So you like to play games ha,

Villain: Indeed!,(magna turns his head to the left while lying on his back on the floor) ha ha ha !

Magna: ah ahrrr, (wounded in pain)
(turns his head, monster he was vs. Has sword in direct point in his face, monster laughs)

Magna: I,……I will destroy you both! (he quickly kicks the monster in the ankle and
Magna see his gun in sight beside him, grabs his gun quickly, firing at the monster, who then hints the ground, and quickly gets up, holding his, gun, he quickly looks back to his son hiding in the bushes, then he grips his gun tight, and charges towards the villain)

Villain: a a arh, I wouldn’t take, another step if I were you…..

(Magna tops hesitantly)

Magna: Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t….destroy you…..

Villain: ha ah, Bring forth the prisoner!
(The foot soldiers, stand aside and relied someone)
Magna: No,…..(Camera zooms to Magna’s face, Scene goes black)

(Camera fades in from black)

Magna:….No….(camera, then pans up from the floor to a woman’s face,)

Magna: Amerai…….

Amerai:…..i’m, so….sorry (Crying on he knees)

Villain: (laughs)

Magna: (grips his gun tighter, shacking, his hand) your quarrel is with me,……leave her out of this….. what do you want from me?

Villain: The magna crystal…..the amulet on your chest, holds great power,……

Magna: (puts his hand on his chest) ahhhr….. (and then looks back at villain)

Villain: Give me your powers and she is yours………..as well as the antidote,…..

Magna: Antidote?

Villain: shows antidote, camera zooms in to it) (Magna grunts) this virus is one of the most deadly viruses in this part of the galaxy, and an antidote, for this cure is very hard to find, not to mention it’s a quick killer, so time is of the essence, Ha ha ha….

(Magna, arhhhh)

(Monster Slowly gets up behind magna, holding his chest, holding his sword to his back) You heard him move it, shoving him, (magna as really pissed as he was, elbowed, the monster, defending himself buy blocking him with his gun, which then he flipped in to sword mode, ducking the monsters strike, and striking him across the chest, the monster fell and exploded, as magna, was walking towards to villain, striking foot soldiers in his path.)

Amerai: no…don’t do it, (magna slowly walks injured towards villain)

Magna: Now….it is your turn,……give me the anti-virus or else….

Villain: (He then picks her up using her as a shield, but then throws her at magna, he catches her), but…… then…….

Villain: I guess our deal is off, no power on anti-virus (Crushing the cure in his hand, and camera zooms into in)

Magna: No!.....

Villain: Did you really think, it would be that easy, (laughs and then walks away)

Amerai: (collapses in pain, he holds her close)

(Magna looks up, villain who stops and turns around and says)

Villain: we shall meet, again, and when we do your power will be mine…
(then he fades away, with his foot soldiers)

Note: by this time magna lost most of his comrades pretty much every thing, and was not about to lose his wife, as well. As the villains disappeared, magna turned to look at his wife as she fell to the ground he runs over to her catching her in his arms…

magna: no,.....oh god please no.......what have I done?….(Crying)

wife: its ok (hand on his face as a tear on her face)

magna: i can afford to loose you,......i can not live with out you, (Crying)
wife: i will always love you and Zika (son) please loo...k...af..ter...him....(hand drops to the ground as her body lays lifelessly in his arms)

magna: no nooo oh god no (magna cries holding her in his arms)

Son: Dad....(as he stands behind magna)

magna: (gasps looks up and places wife on the carefully ground, then he gets up and turns around) (son looks at his lifeless mother on the ground, confused)

magna: (turns and looks at his wife also, then looks to the ground, then looks at his son) ……..urmmm, (holding his hand out to his son) your……..m..(Son cuts in)

Son: Is mummy asleep? (Looking sideways and confused)

Magna: (out of desperation and struck for words)….Yes…Yes.. Mommy is Resting in Peace. (Magna’s legs being to tremble and falls to his knees, he puts his hand on his son’s shoulder) I….i I,

Son: whats wrong dad?

Magna: I’m so sorry Zika (son)(As he hugs his son close to him) (Closing Scene, camera Pans out, and up towards the sky)

Scene 2:

(Camera pans Magna’s walking feet with son, by his side, walking with wife in his arms, slow motion with sad dramatic music)

(the crowed village, stands on divided sides as magna walks through holding wife in arms, he then places her: (Not sure if to have magna put wife on top of stone coffin top or to have him place her in a small wooden boat floating out to sea?)

(After magna places her body in boat or on top of stone table casket) he stands holding her hand telling her:

Magna: I….am so sorry, I couldn’t save you (places roses in her hands Kisses her on the forehead and then steps back, his son then holds his hand)

Magna: (Looks down, sees his son, holding his hand, nodes, his son then hugs him,)

Son: Will we ever see mummy again?

Magna: of course, One day….you will (as camera fades out from his wife) magna then picks his son up carries him away in on his arms, as his son, looks back over his shoulder one last time at his mother, son shows a slight tear. (Scene end)
Image size
1500x1182px 948.37 KB
Make
PENTAX Corporation
Model
PENTAX Optio M20
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/3.1
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Jun 14, 2009, 11:41:53 PM
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CJM-94X's avatar
Amerai: Defendes our son...
Magna: Amerai! Amerai!
(Day before Magna loses Zika)